Blog 4: Comment
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Hi! I found it clear what the whole post is about and in this case, it is about the “sky tangler” and from what I can see it is a very cute enemy that will be using range attacks to take down the player. I love the design, maybe a bit to basic but that is maybe your style and just because it does not look like “Crysis” does not mean it is bad. I also love that you implemented the markings from the boss so that you tie your enemies together and makes it easy for the player to understand later on when they see the boss that it is an enemy. In your text you describe very well what you have added and what will be added until gold release, you also describe your reasoning behind things for example that the “sky tangler” is a jellyfish and therefore will look very organic in the animation. I have nothing in particular that I think you can improve, I would maybe have like to see that you went a bit deeper in your explanations of how you done things but then again this is only one blog post and you have enough words, so I don’t feel that I can really critique that. Best regards, Mattias Borgqvist. Blog source: workblog832645991.wordpress.com/2018/03/01/project-aetherial-blog-four  |