Comment on blog post 4
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URL to the commnet on Wiktor Ravndal blog post about Cheeky Checkpoints and the commnet itself from Oskar karlsson: https://whitechocoboy.wordpress.com/2018/03/01/cheeky-checkpoints/comment-page-1/#comment-9
Your blog post gives the reader a good over view of what you have been working on this week. It is clear for the reader that you have been working on the checkpoints and that you have had problems whit it. It could have been good to write that you are making a game because of a school project. You do write about why checkpoints are used in your game but maybe you could have written more about if they are needed because of the design document or if they are needed because the level is hard, and the player dies a lot. Maybe focus more on how you come up whit the solution for the problem instead of writing a lot about the problems you had when creating it. If the reader has the same problem as you then this post could be good. It gives the reader good ideas of how to solve the problem and they can avoid having the same problems you had. Oskar Karlsson
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