Critique 6: Johan Fallberg
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Very interesting post! I like how it is turned around your thoughts and feelings concerning how you experienced this course. It gives the reader your very personal point of view on that matter and it is always interesting to compare how different people approached the production of their first game (for the most part!). I feel like you have really well answered the question for this blog post: “what’s the end result and what have you learned?”, because of the way you structured your text. You start by explaining the way you feel about how a team should work together and approach the task of creating a game: knowing how you feel about that allows the reader to understand your mindset and why you write this or this.. From there you switch to how it actually happened in your case and what went right or could have been made better, to finally see what are the actual outcomes of that project for you: having a game, being better at Photoshop and Audacity, etc.. Now the paragraphs are aerated, the text flows well, the post is illustrated with videos, pictures and this all makes that it is always “refreshing”. So it was definitely a good post to read! Great work! -Mikael Ferroukhi  |