Hello Lina! First I want to congratulate you on a really fantastic game. I was more than impressed with what you guys created.
Your post is well-structured and easy to follow. You clearly describe the different aspects related to your work, both the good and the bad. Something I think you did a really good job of, is explaining why you do certain practices or why something can be beneficial or detrimental.
Your post is valuable and I really like the length of it. For this type of topic, you can write hundreds of pages to include all the details. Instead, you created a text that fits the blog format excellently. This was something that I personally had problems with. Choosing the main parts and ignoring all the other exciting things that you also want to talk about is hard.
I therefore think you did an amazing job at creating a text that flows well, is packed with interesting information, that also fits the format of a blog post. Well done!
https://linafemling.wordpress.com/2018/03/20/postmortem/comment-page-1/#comment-14
Hello Lina! First I want to congratulate you on a really fantastic game. I was more than impressed with what you guys created.
Your post is well-structured and easy to follow. You clearly describe the different aspects related to your work, both the good and the bad. Something I think you did a really good job of, is explaining why you do certain practices or why something can be beneficial or detrimental.
Your post is valuable and I really like the length of it. For this type of topic, you can write hundreds of pages to include all the details. Instead, you created a text that fits the blog format excellently. This was something that I personally had problems with. Choosing the main parts and ignoring all the other exciting things that you also want to talk about is hard.
I therefore think you did an amazing job at creating a text that flows well, is packed with interesting information, that also fits the format of a blog post. Well done!
Best,
Michael Degirmen