Blog Comment #5
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Hello! Firstly the artifact which is the playtesting was mostly stated but I feel like you didn’t have the need to add the Alpha presentation to the conversation as it just isn’t correlated to the theme. Whilst the process of playtesting is being told, I also feel it didn’t have a need to be stated where instead of it’s place more writing about the effects of play testing could have been available. Other than that the process of understanding the faults thus showcasing the motivation, is clearly shown. But one problem I feel like is that the effect you is just too statistical, where as you could have shown a much more detailed version of the effect via gameplay improvements. Even with it’s flaws the blog is good at reflecting it’s values, showcasing the player ideas being processed in their desire, for the developers to pursue it. |