My Feedback for Post #2
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For the second week, I commented on Mija Causey’s blog, found here: https://flytrapblog861090001.wordpress.com/2018/02/15/dear-diary-this-week-blog-2/ My comment was as follows: Hey! You’ve written a nice post about an important subject, and apart from some grammatical errors, I believe you have done a good job of explaining what you have done, how you did it as well as why you did it. The text could have a better flow in order for the reader to have an easier time following along, but overall this did not affect the content of the post. It’s interesting to read how your group prepared for the alpha presentation, which is similar to how our group did it actually; as a collaboration between the producer and the designer. Also, I really liked your last slide, incorporating a bit of humour into a presentation is a good idea! Since the alpha presentation is such a big milestone for this project, this blog post is of value as it offers some insight into the preparations made by the group. Good luck on your next couple of sprints leading up to the beta presentation, I look forward to see how your game will develop! //Magdalena  |