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Hello!
So firstly I would like to start with the comment of that you have clearly stated and described your chosen artifact in a detailed manner. I would like to also add that focusing on something as simple as a line, yet showcasing that it isn’t as simple as it looks like, makes the investigation of the artifact much more interesting. While the production process description of the artifact doesn’t feel that detailed, which is understandable as there isn’t too much to say, it still goes over the essential parts. The motivation is well provided as you showcase change of your point of view about the lines with some questioning and working together with your teammates.
As a simple conclusion I would like to say that your reflection contains value as change about an idea have been viewed to the reader. Change of an idea and branching out of it, is a way to showcase a will to improve and experience new things, thus making this investigation of an artifact valuable. As improvements, maybe a more detailed process showcase would be interesting to see, thus making the viewer observe the different line changes of the avatar towards the end.
About Edin Karakurt
2017 Game Design
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