Commenting! #2

Reading this post about creation of art for underwater mines and explosion was a pleasure. Here’s my feedback:

Hi!
I find your post valuable, because it covers the full process of creating an art and gives an insight about the manner you work. You included reasoning for every little aspect along the way, such as looking at WW2 mines or adding algae, which is a big plus! In addition, many pictures were put, making the post nicer to look at. I also have a few suggestions for improving the post – there were some things that you just mentioned and I feel like it would be interesting to read about too! Namely, you stated that you agreed on the art style with the Lead Art and in my opinion adding a few words about what is it exactly would make a reader understand what you’re trying to accomplish. In addition to that, it would be awesome to provide your game’s aesthetics when you say your art fits them nicely. Also, you wrote that you got some new knowledge on how to make explosions after you were done with this one, but I really want to know what is that knowledge 😀

(By the way, I liked no 2 of your initial concept arts the most)

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