Comment #5 – Kristina Stiskaite
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Hello Kristina! Thank you for a good read! You made it clear that you were writing about the alpha and beta playtesting sessions as well as how you collected data during the alpha presentation. If I understand it correctly you had someone interview the play testers and writing down their replies, though it was not as clear as it could have been. In addition, you jump back and forth between writing about the alpha and beta presentations in the same paragraphs, it would increase readability a lot if you were to break down your text into smaller paragraphs with subheadings. I did however find great value in your post, I do share your sentiment that the free-form text submissions were of varying quality to say the least, in terms of how serious the tester approached the questionnaires. Still, while there is bad feedback (for example if someone just says they like or dislike something without providing any other information) any feedback that is provided with an explanation is still good feedback. Overall, good job, I look forward to reading more of your work! Regards, Erik Rosenberg Original post found in the link below:  |