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Feedback to: Hanna Aho Lind
You explained in a good way what you had done working with the design of the mine for your game. I liked to see all the pictures and see and actual development of it. It was easy to follow because of the flow of the text and the pictures as i said made it even clearer. What you could think of for the future is to write it in a little more professional way since it’s school work and i think it would be taken more seriously if written in that way.
You however got everything in there that was supposed to be in the text. You wrote about what you did, a design for the underwater mine, and the process, from rough sketch to final animation, and why you decided to have that particular style to it. It seemed like you planned well with your other graphic-student in your group and used the same brushes and things like that which seems like a good way of working.
The animations was beautiful and I hope you were happy with the end result of your game!
About Sofie Lindberg
2017 Graphics
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