4. Feedback
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To: Gunnlaugur Arnarson Hi Gunnlaugur! Even though the post looked like a wall of text in the beginning you manage to get my attention very early in you text. You started of with explaining why you needed this animation for the game then explained in detail all of you thoughts and problems you had while working with it and did it in a way that was easy to follow and understand. You then explained how you solved the mist problem with pictures and gifs and also in steps which made it very easy to read. The only things I have to point out is the “why” part which you maybe could have explained a bit further. Also at one point you started two sentences that was after each other the same way which made it sound a bit off, so nothing big actually. It was interesting to read about your problems you had throughout this past week and especially how you managed to solve them. Keep up the good work and good luck with your game! /Sofie Lindberg  |