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Sofie Lindberg
I liked your text because you didn’t just sugarcoat your work progress, you made sure to bring up both the good and the bad. You seemed to be very aware of your groups progress. You brought up the pros and the cons from your development. With scrum you could keep an eye every group members progress and check the different tasks and keep them in the time schedule, to get them done in time. It is always easy to miss a task. Like you mentioned that you wished that your group had done more documentations. But all in all scrum seems to have been a useful method for your group.
Sadly you lost a bit of flow in your text because of spelling. I had to read some parts of the text twice, in order to understand them completely. You could have used some commas in your text. So the sentences wouldn’t be so long, in some parts of the text I felt as if I lost my breath. I did really like your text.
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