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-The link of original post: https://wordpress.com/read/blogs/142496093/posts/4
-My comment: So first, sorry for the late comment. I really like the Behemoth you have done! It has great concept, clear lines, and close attention to the details. Also the writing style of your blog was very clear for the readers to follow what you trying to express. You gave the readers a basic background of the character, and you explained your mental activities while making decisions to the character that the readers understand why the character turned out to be like this but not like that. Personally I think it would be good to add some illustrations or pictures when it comes to vocabulary like “old howitzer gun” “missiles” “ordinary shells”, so that people like me who are not familiar with these things can get a better understanding of it. In this blog, you focused mostly on why you did it and what you did it, maybe it’s a good idea to share how you did it as well? I believe more artists like me would like to learn the technics of machine drawing. Good start and well done with the Behemoth! I am looking forward to playing your game.  |