My Feedback for Post #6
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This week I commented on Niklas Ericsson’s blog post, found here: https://niklasericssonblog.wordpress.com/2018/03/14/sprint-8-postmortem/ My comment reads as follows: Hello! Your post is well written with very few grammatical errors, and it is clear what you are talking about. The first thing that springs to mind however, is the lack of images. As this final post deals with the end result of the game, I think it would have been nice to see some screenshots of the game and possibly some descriptions of the design decisions as well. Though I am happy to hear you feel like you managed to make the game feel how you wanted it to! In regards to the assignment I am supposed to give feedback on whether you have described what is done, how it is done, and why it is done, which I believe don’t really fit for a postmortem post. Since this final post is mostly reflective and doesn’t deal with a feature the same way previous posts have I think you have met the requirements of a postmortem, even though the how and why are somewhat lacking. I would have liked to seen a bit more reflections however. Good job and good luck with your upcoming arcade game! //Magdalena  |