6. Feedback

To: Cai Songqiao

Your sentences had a great flow and it was easy to follow what you have done and learn throughout these weeks. I’m glad that you were happy with the end result even though you did not have enough time to implement everything.

You got everything in there that you were suppose to cover. It was interesting to hear how you solved things as a group and that you learn that being clear to each other and do things time helps a lot when working together with other people with different mindes.

What you could think of is to write in a bit more professional manner. Yes it is a blog, but with a different purpose than many other blogs. I personally like text like this better it feels more personal and cozy. It’s was only the beginning that was written like this and you switched over to a more professional way of writing after the first three rows.

You could have used a picture to show some of your work or maybe the end result of your game but otherwise everything was good and clear.
I really liked the aesthetics of your game and I think you did a great job with the art in it. Keep up the good work in the upcoming projects!

/Sofie Lindberg

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