Comment 5

Hi, Samantha!

Your text was really well written and nicely divided with headlines, making it even more enjoyable to read. Furthermore, the use of pictures contributed to the experience and gave it a more light-hearted side to it even though they maybe didn’t specifically relate to the playtesting.

The presentation of the two initial options followed by your contemplations leading up to finding a different solution to issue at hand was interesting to follow. The choice of method is well conveyed and could probably be very useful to someone setting out to playtest on their own. Another useful lesson to be learned is your mention of not having a target audience, with the reason why and the complication that became the aftermath.

All in all, great job! I will surely use the provided link and test the game if I have the time. Otherwise I’m looking forward to seeing the finished product towards the end of the week!

/Max Kassander

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