Comment Week 4
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Greetings Hanna, (William Teurnell, Team Poltergeist) I enjoy the effects you are reaching for. You go into good detail on your thoughts and processes, and your decisions are clearly motivated. You explain the impact and intended meaning of your visuals, and you let the reader know of its significance. It was interesting how you recognised and worked around the fact that there was no animation by creating a sprite that appears caught-in-motion. I liked the end result for this reason; it looks dramatic. I was part of the group that made this concept, and therefore I know well the aesthetics of the game. However, some readers may not. Perhaps it could be in order to touch somewhat upon the core aesthetics of your product so the reader has some sense of context. This would also give you substance to go into why a dramatic, mid-motion, type of sprite is appropriate. Keep up the good work – it’s fun to see one’s concept brought into existence.
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