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Feedback on: https://gd2developmentas.wordpress.com/2018/02/15/blog2/comment-page-1/#comment-6 Nice boat! I like that you and you group seem to be dedicated to keep the game and it´s assets anchored in reality, and you focus a lot on not wanting to have anachronism and such in the game. You explain your aesthetic goal of the boat clearly and you execute that aesthetic well in regards to the boat. You explain the aspects of the boat and show them well, such as the more industrialised version and the lamps for localisation. As for feedback: You could show your process of making the boat, by showing sketches and concepts etc. and explain how that process went. I´d like to see a picture of the boat implemented in the game, I know that the game at this stage might not have been able to have assets implemented to it or have it making sense and actually looking like the game – But having some kind of background or an environment would make easier to see what you were thinking when designing the boat to fit in the world and aesthetic of the game as a whole, if it correlates with the colour schemes etc.
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