Blog Post Comment 2 – Anders Kemppainen
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Link to the post: https://andersdotgames.wordpress.com/2018/02/15/presentations-where-i-wanna-be/ Hi Anders! I will critique your blog post today. Let me start with saying that your text clearly conveys which artifact you have decided to reflect upon. Furthermore, I think you clearly display your thought process while creating the presentation. You bring up the different pros and cons of using different presentation programs and why you ended up choosing the one you did use in the end. It was also interesting to read your thought process behind the visual aspects of the presentation and how you wanted it to resemble the game. All in all I’d say this post was valuable, since it brings up your thought process behind your choices. It also made me as a reader reflect on how I personally make presentations. I can’t really find anything in particular you could improve on, I think the post was structured in a good way and it was interesting and fun to read. Great job and good luck with future work!  |