Blog Comment 2
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A good blogpost with clear enough information to understand what you wanted to show, however there are some things that made me read some of the paragraphs more than once to understand the context. You explain almost everything you write, as the reader would be a non-gamer in the terms of how you talk about scrum and the Alpha-Presenatation. On one hand this can be helpful if the intended reader is one with little to no experience within the gaming industry or education. I personally don’t think it is needed to explain these terms in detail, since the people visiting your blog most likely are familiar with them. Reading these expanations got me off track from what the post actually was all about, forcing me to backtrack to the parts before the explanations and read again, skipping the detailed parts to feel the flow of the text. Besides from that I got a perfect understanding of what you had been doing, why it was necessary and how you had tackled the issue. An overall good read, keep up the good work! /Hampus Serrestam  |